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写作考试TASK 2，题目有两道，道是看图说明(A类)或者书信(G类)，要求150字，20分钟;第二道是议论文或说明文(议论为主)，要求250字，40分钟。
雅思考试的评分标准包括四个方面：
Task
and
Range and
雅思的就是其评分标准，分别为“内容”，“逻辑结构”，“语法的准确使用和范围”以及“词汇量”四个标准。根据下面的全面修改案例，读者可以清楚的看到一篇5.5分的雅思范文是如何在修改之前蜕变成为高分作品。
8 – Test 2
the way many with each other has of .
In what ways has the types of make?
Has this a or ?
原文：
the way with each other has of .
Yes, the has the ’s in very . use to wait and try to find easy way to their or far. In past there was no quick to or to any one to . The with past was that it were very slow and were time such as , etc. used to to write their or to their love ones due to of . When it comes to level, the and be but, to that time there were no .
Now the have , from far their loves one in an easy and quick ways which the level two . the level of the to , has the are with high-tec which the . There are many many which are now such as , cards etc.
The has the which help to talk or to at any time in the world.
can their or any time they want. It has so and to be in touch with your , even with the .
原文翻译：
今天，由于科技的发展人们相互交流的方式也发生了变化。
是的。技术改善了人们的交流方式。以前人们总是期待找到方便的方法联系居住在异地的亲朋好友。以前没有高效的技术帮助人们沟通交流。以往的通讯系统的问题是速度慢，费时间，比如：电报和信件等。在过去，人们不敢给爱人写一些私密的事情因为担心通信不够安全。专业的通信技术应该是安全的、准确的，但是在当时根本没有安全的通信可言。
现在，这些事情已经改变了，住在远处的人们利用一种高效的方式联系他们的爱人。这些方式改善了人们之间的交流方式。因为人们使用了改善交流的高科技，所以他们交流的方式已经得到改善。现在有了很多这类媒体，比如：国际互联网、语音卡等。
这些技术提供了更快的移动性，帮助人们在任何时间、世界上的任何地方与他人沟通。
现在人们能够在任何时间联系亲朋好友。和朋友、家人以及陌生人的沟通变得更容易了。
(注：上述的习作存在语法错误和表达错误，因此对应的翻译也有一定出入。)
:
This is an by a who a Band 5.5 score. Here is the ’s :
这是一位考生写的5.5分作文。下面是考官的评语。
The topic has been from the task and is from the word count. This the at 236 words, so the loses marks for this.
文章的开篇是从题目中抄来的，所以不能算字数。剩下的只有236个字，考生因此失分。
This both , but the first is not well in terms of how have . , there is a clear that the have been and have , with some ideas to this. There is a to the , with some use of time and . There is also some , . is not , and ideas are not well . A range of that is to the topic is used, some and . There are quite a lot of in word form, word or , but these do not . A of type is used, but not . in and are at times, but only cause for the .
此文回答了两个问题，但是在回答个问题时，并没有充分讨论问题中关于现实中的关系是如何变化的。但是，文章展示了清晰的观点(这些影响都是好的，而且这些关系都有所改善)并配以相关的观点支持。文章的论证循序渐进，使用了很多表示时间的提示词以及连接词，但是个别有些重复。分段不够逻辑，而且一些观点没有充分的关联。使用了一些与主题相关的词汇，包括准确并自然的表达。虽然有一些词性、词义以及拼写错误，但是并不会太影响理解。使用了各种句型，但是很多不太准。语法错误和标点错误有时会干扰理解，但是不会给读者产生太大的麻烦。
修改后：
,.(It is true that has ’s ways. 利用It is true that的句式突出后面的事件;和shift是同义词替换;the way 和 way是同义词替换。这样的变化可以避免引用题目中的原词。)
(拒绝非正式的用法。)The has the ’s in very . used(前后时态必须一致。)to wait and try to find easy ways(名词单复数)to their or far. In the past, there was no (词汇使用不当，应该改成) to or to any two . And(重要的连接词，表示本句和上一句共同解释为什么“人们一直在期待找到更有效的通讯方式。”)the ofthe past was that they (指代不清，这里指代的是 )were too (表示“太”。)slow and were time- (表示“费时”), (这是应该使用分词形式，表示对主句的 ways的具体描述。)the , the etc. Not only that,(这里需要连接词) used to be to write their or to their loved ones of ( of 强调“外因”;due to 强调“根据”) (根据上下文理解，此处应该表达的是“信息安全”)of . (They their might be or read by some .这里可以继续描述人们的担心。)
，(上文主要讨论过去的情况，而接下来将讨论现在的变化)now the have .(必须避免使用“，”连接两个句子。正确的处理方法是，要么采用断句的方法，要么添加连词。) in a long their one in ( and ) ways, which (主谓一致，which代替ways。)the level two . (用词重复)of the and (主谓之间不能添加“，”。)has been (这里使用被动是因为沟通质量的提升是因为技术的发展。) they are with high- which their . There are many(重复) such as , cards etc.So the has , which help to talk or keep in touch with each other at any time in the world.(不应该单独成段，应该和上一段结合在一起。)(本句应该被删除，因为没有提出任何新的观点，并且与上文的句子非常重复。)
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