短文类写作,在近三年的高考中是比较突出的,下面看高考题,或许我们能看出什么道道来:
(2020·全国卷II)上周末,你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文,介绍这次活动,内容包括:1. 农场情况;2. 采摘过程;3. 个人感受
(2021·新高考I卷)你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1. 读报的经历;2. 喜爱的栏目;3. 期望和祝福。
(2022·浙江)假定你是李华,在“中国-爱尔兰文化节”活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Chris,现在他已回国,请你给他 写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.回忆活动经历;2. 分享个人收获;3. 希望保持联系。
我们不难看出,个人经历和感受或收获是命题人特别青睐的。这点在不少最近的模拟题里也得到体现了。
不过很遗憾的是,很多写作范文过于模板化,虽然也能拿到12分,但要达到13,14分,那几乎是不可能的。
满分的作文必须带有语言的灵气,地道、自然是必须的。而国人包括我自己写的应用文过于僵化,过于迎合评分要求,而最终让人觉得千篇一律,显得很是做作。而是基于地道的英语文化,语言地道简洁且生动,很是值得我们学习。
下面我给这三篇提供范文,此范文是我让对每一个题目写至少十篇范文,然后我结合国内应试作文的阅卷要求来进行优点整合,经过仔细阅读范文,我总结以下:
总结这几个必用句式:
环境描写:
As we , we were bythe sweet of ripe , , and pears, to be .
劳动描写:
With in hand, we set out on our .It was a of , with every fruit a chord of . Task , we were still in of .
感受描写:
, not only did the allow me a toget close to ,but I the of . It was a day well spent, with to for a .
The was not just about the , but also about the and that came with it. I did my on the world.
回忆中的经历描写:
I still the first time I up a copy, by its . it has a part of my daily , me with a to the world and my .
The of our time are still vivid in my mind.
As I the event, I can’t help but smile at the ofour , about each other’s , and the and .
本文作为我的新书《新高考英语写作王中王 读后续写》的配套《应用文写作王中王》的部分,此部分我把最可能考的主题分为七个,每个主题下3篇范文加语言规律总结。本周五在我的微店销售,我会公布。微店二维码如下;
完整如下:
(2020年,全国卷II)
上周末,你和同学参加了一次采摘活动。请你为班级英语角写一篇短文,介绍这次活动,内容包括:1. 农场情况;2. 采摘过程;3. 个人感受
Last , my and I had a time at a pick-your-own-fruit farm.
As we , we were bythe sweet of ripe , , and pears, to be . With in hand, we set out on our .It was a of , with every fruit a chord of . Task , we were still in of .
, not only did the allow me a toget close to ,but I the of . It was a day well spent, with to for a .
2021年新高考I卷
你校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1. 读报的经历;2. 喜爱的栏目;3. 期望和祝福。
As a of the Youth , I am to its 10th . I still the first time I up a copy, by its . it has a part of my daily , me with a to the world and my .
Among the many , my is ” ,” which me to and , with its style, vivid, and -.
I my to Youth, it to to and , to and to . May it keep like a of , the path for .
(2022·浙江)假定你是李华,在“中国-爱尔兰文化节”活动中结识了爱尔兰朋友Chris,现在他已回国,请你给他 写一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 回忆活动经历;2. 分享个人收获;3. 希望保持联系。
Dear Chris,
I hope this email finds you well. I can’t it has been a few weeks since our at the “China- .” The of our time are still vivid in my mind.
As I the event, I can’t help but smile at the ofour , about each other’s , and the and . The was not just about the , but also about the and that came with it. I did my on the world.
I hope that the , we can stay in touch and our .
Best ,
Li Hua
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