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最近这段时间，不知道有多少同学被一个新词给刷屏了——，一个由美国“开放人工智能研究中心”研发的聊天机器人程序。
它能够通过学习和理解人类的语言来进行对话，还能根据聊天的上下文进行互动，甚至能完成撰写邮件、视频脚本、文案、翻译、代码等任务。简单来说，就是你能做到的一些事，也能做到；而你做不到的一些事，可能它也能做到。
比如，此前就有新闻表示通过了谷歌的编程面试，并拿到了年薪18.3万美元（折合人民币约124.1万元人民币）的L3工程师offer；它甚至可以帮大学生写出一篇质量不错的论文，连教授都分辨不出来是学生自己写的还是人工智能写的
一系列的神操作让火速出圈。那么，如果将运用于雅思和托福学习领域，它到底能帮到大家多少呢？
为此，我们让分别写了一篇雅思作文和一篇托福作文，并邀请我们的新东方老师为这两篇作文分别进行评分，来一起看看结果是怎样的吧？
写出的雅思作文
能得多少分？
首先，我们让严格按照雅思大作文的题目要求，根据上周（2月4日）的纸笔考题题目写一篇文章，来看看它在短短十几秒内生成的答案到底能得到多少分？
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2023.2.4题目：Some think they have right to use as much fresh water as they want, while the use of fresh water as it is . both views and give your own .
这是一篇典型的双边讨论文章，文章大意是：一些人认为他们有随意使用淡水资源的自由，另一些人认为政府应该控制淡水资源的使用，因为淡水资源是有限的。
这样一篇比较抽象的题目，让不少同学在考试现场抓耳挠腮，不知道从何谈起，而当你将题目输入，它分分钟就搞定了。
给大家看看根据上述题目生成的大作文全文（向下滑动可查看全文内容）↓↓
The over the use of fresh water is a one, with some their right to use as much of this vital as they , while that the have over its and . Both sides valid that are worth .
Those who in the use of fresh water argue that it is a basic human right to have to clean and water. They view water as an of their lives and have the to use it as they see fit. This is in the that have over their own lives and not be to , .
On the other hand, those who that the the use of fresh water argue that it is a and must be to that have to it. They that the has a to the and the use of , water. In their view, the use of water would lead to its , , and of water .
, I that the have over the use of fresh water. While I the of , I that the of fresh water is a . Fresh water is a that is vital for life, and its use could have on the and . , the has a to that all have to clean and safe water, of their .
An of this can be seen in the water in Cape Town, South . In 2018, the city a that its water to low . The was to water , the of water that each could use. This was to the of the city’s water and that the would have to water in the .
In , while both on the use of fresh water have valid , I that the have over its . The of this is for the and , and the has a to that all have to clean and safe water.
我们的雅思写作老师贾宜承也对人工智能生成的这篇文章进行了分析，并表示这篇文章是一篇可以拿到7分以上的范文。
贾宜承老师表示，总体来看，整个文章段落布局合理，主体段的段落字数相近（well-），在讨论了题目中的两个观点后，用两个段落表达了自己的观点，最后进行了总结。
根据雅思写作的四项评分标准具体来看，这篇人工智能写出来的文章优缺点如下：
1.Task
文章对题目做出全面回应且字数充足，分别讨论两个观点并清晰地展示了自己的立场。不过在主体段论述双方观点时，有些过于笼统，对于段落的某些论点并没有具体展开论证。
2. and
文章段落布局清晰合理，每个段落都有清晰的主旨句，并且在段落内使用连接词，例如on the other hand, 等，将句与句之间的逻辑关系有效组织起来。但也存在段落内部句与句之间缺少有效衔接词的情况。
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文章能够使用足够的词汇对观点进行论述，用词准确并且使用相关的话题词汇，比如, , 。准确使用了一些词汇组合，例如have to, be to。但文章中一些词语搭配重复使用多次，没有展现词汇使用的丰富性。
4. Range and
将这篇文章带入（一款专门进行文章语法修改的工具）后，语法准确度方面被打满分（认为文中fresh water应改为，但两者都可以表示淡水），也就是说这篇文章几乎看不出语法层面的错误。
从句型结构来看，这篇文章的句子平均在18词以上，而且使用了不同的从句形式、with+分词结构等。不过文中一些表达比较固定，如多次使用have+名词的方式，have a to, have to, have the to, have over等。
贾宜承老师表示，综合上述对这篇雅思写作文章的评析，如果是基础比较薄弱（写作只有5分以下）的同学，的确可以结合提供的范文来学习一些话题词汇和表达方式，积累写作素材。而对于想要冲击雅思写作高分的同学，直接学习的范文的帮助还是有限的。从搭建框架到论点论证的思考，再到最后形成一篇完整的雅思作文，需要大家在有效的指导下反复练习。
接下来我们又让写了一篇托福的文章↓↓
写出的托福作文
能得多少分？
小编让写了一篇托福TPO54 Task2的作文，托福写作Task 2的时限是30分钟，而花20秒，就交付了一篇350-400字独立写作。
全文如下：
The over on arts has been for many years and there are valid on both sides. Those who for on the arts argue that it is an in and that it to , and job , and , and the of . On the other hand, those who argue for on argue that it , pride, and , and can drive and the of – jobs.
In my view, both arts and are and be by to some . , the exact of to each area will on a of , the and of the , as well as the needs and of the .
For , in where there is a of and , it may be more to more to the arts. In these , in the arts can drive , jobs, and . In , in where is a major of pride and , it may be more to more to .
At the same time, it’s to the of both arts and . in the arts can by jobs and . The arts also have the to drive and , which can lead to new and and a boost to the . On the other hand, in can also drive , as and the of – jobs can to local .
, the of spend more money on the arts or is a one and will on a of . While it is to both arts and , the exact of will on the needs and of the , as well as the and of the . In , while both arts and are and be by , the exact of to each area will on the needs and of the and the of the . in both the arts and can drive , and pride, and to the of a .
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多少托福考生看完都哭了？文章用词无误，语法正确，并且文章篇幅达到了460词，那么文章实际能拿到多少分呢？我们邀请了新东方的两位托福老师对作文进行了评分：
徐赫然老师：这篇文章大概在3.5-4分左右（满分5分）。整篇文章用词语法都很好，语言表达上确实不错，但是文章很像官方说的那种冗余的文章，只是把俩选项分析了一遍没有完全展开，论据比较少。
彭璐老师：我会给4.5分。文章写得非常成熟，对话题进行了非常全面的考虑和论证。开头段的背景中，充分考虑了两方的观点和主要理由。在自己的观点段中，给出了清晰的观点和进一步的建议。在后续的两个段落中，分别从 和 两个角度分情况讨论/比较了投资 和 art 的好处。最后两段中，再次强调了决策需要充分权衡。
有的细节展开可以更充分一点，另外文章整体的内容/立场/逻辑的全面性已经超越了托福要求考生做到的程度，不建议学生按照这篇去模仿，就我们的实际教学来说，这样的思考和结构比较复杂，会教授更简单、好上手的写法。（也就是说不建议同学们用生成文章后作为模板背诵模仿）
整体来看，无论是雅思还是托福文章，都能在短时间内写出一篇相对高分、但还不至于达到满分水平的文章，还是会有一些缺点。对于大家而言，可以多去学习里面提供的好词好句归为己用，但全篇直接照搬背诵是没什么必要的了。
不知道大家对于人工智能的发展前景有什么看法呢？大家觉得还能运用在雅思学习的领域进行帮助（正当的），欢迎来评论区发表你的看法哦~
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